A Message in a bottle
I threw in the sea,
where it'll reach
I know not.
But the tides will take it
wherever they'll go.
Or may be lost in the sea.
It may reach a worthy hand,
who will tell the world,
the story,
about the message in the bottle,
thrown out at sea.
6 comments:
Vooww, Atreyi, great lines yar, very well penned emotions, and above all, glad to see you back!! keep writing!
hey thanx buddy, am trying but u know how big time lazy I am...
what an amalgamation of imagery and truth!
bful, as a flowing deep blue water stream..
I also narrated something of the same whirlpool..
may be u ll like to have a look,
http://kamnazquill.blogspot.com/2008/12/tide-of-life.html
yours is wayy better, i have always admired ur verses...
vow
let it be a paper in a bottle, or electronic letters on a screen. your words have reached a lot of people! beautiful! :)
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